Monday, April 1, 2013

A is for Almost Amish (And Arlee Bird)


     “They told me I wasn’t plain.”

     Eliza sighed; she’d been waiting for this day to come; only she never thought it would happen so soon. Abbey was still so young.

     She got down on her knees so they were eye-level. “Don’t listen to them; sometimes people are just mean.”    

     Abbey nodded tentatively. Even if she didn’t understand, she’d heard truth in her mother’s words.

     “They said that you weren’t plain either, not anymore-what did they mean by that?”

     Eliza’s face went crimson. She always knew she’d regret not moving when she’d had the chance.

     “It’s about me, baby, not you,” Eliza whispered and Abbey nodded at that, too.

     After a few seconds of silence, Eliza pulled herself up and went back to the counter and the sandwiches she’d been making.

     Abbey stayed planted where she was, and looking down at the floor, asked one last question:
“What does it mean to be a bastard?”


*A special thank you to Arlee Bird to setting this up and continuing to do so year after year.

20 comments:

  1. that was a wonderful piece...

    Jeremy [Retro]
    AtoZ Challenge Co-Host
    Oh No, Let's Go... Crazy

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  2. It almost makes me want to cry. Lovely. Look forward to your B :)

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  3. Ouch...people really can be so darn mean.

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  4. I'm impressed by the amount of time it will take to write all those shorts! Good to read though.

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  5. Poor Abbey! That stings.

    Thanks for the recognition and your efforts as a minion.

    Lee
    Wrote By Rote
    An A to Z Co-host blog

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  6. Sad but beautiful. Thanks for sharing. And loves from a fellow Melonie (even if it's spelled different)

    Hi from Nagzilla bloghopping A to Z

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  7. Dropping by from the A to Z. I'm #149 and a new follower! Great to meet you!

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  8. Ooh, powerful stuff! It's great to meet you, Melanie. I'm hopping over as one of Matt's minions! Happy A to Z!

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  9. Oh, my! That last line! Pulling on the heart strings. Nice work. :)

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  10. :( Sad, but you conveyed so much about the characters and the story in just that one scene.

    Shannon at The Warrior Muse

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  11. That's a really powerful ending line!
    ~Summer

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  12. I'm already hooked!
    Connie
    I'm visiting from the A to Z Blog Challenge
    Peanut Butter and Whine

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  13. Yay, another fiction friend on the challenge. I love your start. This piece has so much power in so few words. The last line is a real kicker--in a good way. Can't wait to see how your month unfolds!

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  14. awwwww ...
    lovely!

    thanks so much for visiting my a-z post!

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  15. awh bless her heart :(


    auntyamo
    http://ficticiousamo.wordpress.com/

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