Her fingers twisted
the paper as I sat and watched. It was
the same thing every day; she’d come into the library and sit at the table
furthest from the door, and she would make her creatures.
That day was different; she bypassed the usual birds and turtles and made other things instead; darker things.
One by one, the table
became filled with dragons and slayers and such.
Her eyes rose to meet
mine. Without looking down, she reached for sheet after sheet of colorful
paper, folding and pressing them together. When she was done, she covered what
she’d made with both of her hands.
Her chair scrapped across
the floor as she stood and crossed the room, stopping when she came to my
table. She placed the colorful phoenix on the seat next to mine and I knew it
for what it was; an introduction and a warning.
Just wonderful writing,
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Thank you. I enjoy your poems as well.
DeleteThis character fascinates me. I'd love to read a whole novel about her. Cool story!
ReplyDeleteI hadn't considered writing more, but I may. Her voice is pretty loud in my head.
DeleteIntriguing stuff. Enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, I enjoyed having you here.
DeleteThis is excellent! The best yet. I can so see it being expanded into a novel!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. I'm thinking about it.
DeleteEnjoyed reading this! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, and I enjoyed reading your post today, too. It was great getting to know more about you.
DeleteOh, I want to know more. This is great.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Maybe when I'm done with my endless revisions on Rephaim I"ll work on this one.
DeleteSo cool! I loved the last line. Great piece Melanie.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I will have that picture of your husband with that octopus on his face in my mind all day. And he looked happy about it!
DeleteLove your writing! More please!
ReplyDeleteThank you. There is something about this character that makes me want to tell her story.
DeleteSpooky! I have a friend who does origami, but I've never gotten into it myself.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by N is for Northanger Abbey. I am glad you love Austen as well :)
Cheers from Brandy at brandysbustlings.blogspot.ca
My pleasure, and thank you for coming here.
Deletewow... love the mood you created! :)
ReplyDeletethanks so much for visiting my a-z post! so sorry for the late visit...
Come when you can, as often as you can. You're always welcome.
DeleteThanks for Ginger Tea suggestion on my post today. I will surely try it! This is a great post Melanie! Love these "super shorts".
ReplyDeleteDani @ Entertaining Interests
#warriorminion
Thank you. I've really enjoyed writing them. I may keep on with it after A to Z, not daily, but maybe once a week.
DeleteI want more! You've created a great mood here. Really enjoyed this piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dana, and thanks for stopping in.
DeleteWow, something so innocent and yet threatening.
ReplyDeleteI love to do that; take something people aren't afraid of and twist it.
DeleteAlrighty, it took me less time than I thought to finish my last blog post so I am back again to tell you that...
ReplyDeleteI nominated you for The Leibster Blog Award, but you have to visit me again to find out all about it! http://brandysbustlings.blogspot.ca/2013/04/i-got-liebster-blog-award.html
Cheers!
Thank you, I'm heading back to your site now.
DeleteVery nice. Quite captivating.
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http://pepperwords.com
Thank you, I liked your flash as well.
DeleteThat's a great scene. Full of intrigue and curiosity.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteReally great writing!
ReplyDeleteI'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
Writer In Transit
Thank you, good to have you here.
DeleteBeautifully written!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteOMG, you are seriously inventive and the Queen - I swear, the absolute QUEEN - of intriguing, provocative writing! Your super shorts are super great! Keep going!
ReplyDeleteYou are seriously making me blush. Thank you so much. I hope you like the rest of them, too.
DeleteVery intriguing to see someone communicating with her origami.
ReplyDeletethank you.
DeleteVery ominous. You're a tease! I have to know more. :)
ReplyDeleteMwhaaa!!
DeleteI'm a big fan of origami and loved this piece. Very intriguing. You pack such a punch in your short flashes. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Elise.
DeleteThat is a little creepy...
ReplyDeleteYou know how I love the creepy.
DeleteOoh, cool - this definitely makes me want to read more and find out what's going on!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Deletedang, that's fabulous! I love that last line. It opens many possibilities.
ReplyDeleteI guess he wasn't the only one watching, was he?
DeleteOoo- that was an unexpected place to end up! Definitely piqued my curiosity with this one!
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