And then…
This is my Achilles heel of writing. I know why it happens; when I write my rough draft, it tends to be a series of summaries. By the time I’m done it ends up looking like a very long synopsis.
And then…
I go back and fill in the dialogue and other details.
And then…
I spend the rest of my revisions trying to get rid of the And thens…
Oh girl. Same here. When I have to go back and limit my word count, I always go straight for the "and thens..."
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Well, the good part of stories happen after the "and then." And then they were chased a by the Great Pug. And then she birthed a demon. Etc, etc, etc. Looking forward to your blog this month!
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