Good
morning. I hope all of you had a relaxing weekend. This is a Monday, so as
promised; this week will start with a super short story.
Take
care -mel
Leaves
My
thumb grazes along the edge of a saw-tooth leaf, as I try to decide if it’s
something I can eat without killing myself. I can’t remember; it’s been years.
A twig snaps behind me.
I
freeze.
A
cat, big one, saunters past. It moves
along the ground, like me; only I doubt he realizes he’s being hunted. I lean
back on my heals as it makes its way towards my snare.
Closer, closer, I whisper,
feeling the saliva fill my mouth. It has been a long time since I’ve had meat.
There
is another snap followed by a shudder as the snare takes hold and he tries to
wrestle himself free.
I
drop the leaf and make my way to his side. He’s caught by his left forepaw. His
other takes a swipe at me.
It
isn’t his wild eyes that I see, although it should be. It’s his right paw, and
the scar that’s there. I lift my own right hand, or what’s left of it. It took
me five years to whittle enough away to be able to slip through their snare.
I
meet the cat’s eyes. He would do that as well; he would do whatever it took to
be free.
With
my maimed hand I reach around and release his paw. He takes off without looking back.
May your road be easier than mine, I whisper.
I
glance around me. “Leaves it is.”
Check out these reviews of The Newstead Project:
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Reading Away the Days – Interview Guest Post or Tens List
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From the Bootheel Cotton Patch -Spotlight
Check out these reviews of The Newstead Project:
May 6th
Reading Away the Days – Interview Guest Post or Tens List
Laurie’s Thoughts and Reviews – Review
Sher A Hart: Writing Art – Review
From the Bootheel Cotton Patch -Spotlight
Great story. I'm so glad she didn't eat the cat. And wow, so much creepy stuff implied there. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a great start to a dystopian novel. I'd read more!!
ReplyDeleteThat was nice of her to let him go! (Or him.)
ReplyDeletePredators have all the fun. Nice of the prey to wish a positive life upon the cat before choosing leaves!
ReplyDeleteThat is a great story. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteAw, can't eat him after that.
ReplyDeleteAnother great story.
ReplyDeleteAnother wonderful snippet, Melanie!
ReplyDeleteWriter In Transit
Oh hooray! The generous heart wins out. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad she didn't eat the cat too. Imagine the hairballs!
ReplyDeleteVery nice! I enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy every snippet/flash fiction you have posted. You have talent.
ReplyDeletecrazy cat! melanie, this was quite good!! glad to meet and follow you, hi!
ReplyDeleteOh my... another brilliant short. Love it.
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