Saturday, April 25, 2015

A to Z: V is for Valentine

For A to Z 2015 I will be posting flash fiction, all random, all the crazy musings of a crazy mind. Hope you like them.
V is for Valentine


Oh my love was a red, red rose, perfect in every way.

Oh my love was a red, red rose, then to my dismay,

A thorn appeared, and my love faded away.
 
-Mel

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8 comments:

  1. jaybirdApril 25, 2015 at 6:38 AM

    You are killing me, Mel. You have been turning out one great piece of writing right after the next. Amazing poem, loved it.

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  2. Chrys FeyApril 25, 2015 at 7:01 AM

    That is clever! I love it!

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  3. Kathryn ThorntonApril 25, 2015 at 9:26 AM

    Excellent.

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  4. Susan Gourley/KelleyApril 25, 2015 at 3:57 PM

    LOL. You gotta take the thorns to have the pretty rose.

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  5. Susan KaneApril 25, 2015 at 7:00 PM

    Beauty with its guard

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  6. cleemckenzieApril 27, 2015 at 8:38 AM

    Those thorns! I'm sure they're on those roses to teach us life lessons.

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  7. J.L. CampbellApril 27, 2015 at 11:13 AM

    Yep, the thorns do tend to get in the way.

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  8. Kate LarkindaleApril 27, 2015 at 11:25 AM

    Watch out for those thorns! Nothing in life is as easy as it seems...

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