This
is the finale of a three part tale. Read part one: L is for Larry’s Quest here,
and part two: Q is for Quest here. And now:
T
is for Treasure
Larry tucked the
letter into his pocket, leaving the rest there. That was his first mistake; his
second was going back to his car. He’d suspected that his mother’s neighbors
had been watching him, and he’d been right. They were waiting for him by the
building when he rounded the corner.
Larry skidded to a
stop.
Leon, the ringleader,
spotted him first. “Hey, you’re Alberta’s boy, ain’t you?”
“That’s him,” a voice
answered from behind him. Larry turned to see a man coming at him, carrying the
box of discarded letters.
Larry silently swore
under his breath as his mind tried to come up with something, anything, but he
didn’t have to bother. Leon came up with it for him.
He grabbed the box
from the other man and rummaged through the letters; letting most of them spill
to the ground. He looked like a man with a purpose, like a man who knows what
he’s looking for.
And he was. Leon’s
eyes lit up as he grabbed a single letter, as he let the box fall to the
ground. Those with him seemed to
recognize it as well. They, all of them, knew Larry’s parents and their
treasures much more than Larry ever could, as Larry himself was just beginning
to see.
Regret was the extent
of Larry’s treasure; shame his only prize.
-Mel
Larry just missed his opportunity.
ReplyDeleteWriting flash fiction really sharpens the focus, doesn't it?
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Hi Melanie,
ReplyDeletePowerful. I need to go back and read from the beginning. I have never tried flash fiction. Maybe I might take a stab at it next time around. By the way, I love your images on your banner. Stunning! Enjoy the rest of the A to Z Challenge. Can't believe it's almost over.
That's real unfortunate for Larry. I enjoyed following his story though through those few posts.
ReplyDeleteToo bad for Larry.
ReplyDeleteAw, poor Larry. We all have those Leons in our lives, trying to steal our treasures.
ReplyDeleteRegret and shame? I think I need to buy Larry a beer. He needs one.
ReplyDeleteDid Larry abandon his parents? Not sure if I feel bad for him or not?
ReplyDeleteAnother of your very interesting flash fiction pieces. I've enjoyed these.
ReplyDeleteThanks for finishing Larry's story. I've been waiting happily since q.
ReplyDeletePoor Larry….
ReplyDeleteRegrets and almost got it--Thanks for sharing Larry with your readers.
ReplyDeleteOh dear, poor old Larry. I hope this mob get their comeuppance.
ReplyDeleteT is also for Tantalizing! A gem in embryo. Do you have a goal update today?
ReplyDeleteI would have RAN like the wind if I was Larry... but then again, hindsight is like Monday morning quarterbacking (if that's even a word :)
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