Wednesday, April 30, 2014

Z is for In the Zone

For this year’s A to Z, I will be doing a collection of flash fiction featuring Steven, the MC from Blackbird, from right before he came to Newstead through his first week there.
 

Z is for In the Zone
     After giving me a schedule, he left me alone. I see now that was intentional. Foltz knew how right there I was; I just needed time to let it come to me. And that’s what he gave me: Time.
     I closed my eyes and let that part come out, the part I’ve always known about, but tried to keep hidden, the part Foltz seemed to know about, too. It doubled me over, the force of it, like it had been right there, just waiting to be released.
     I sank to my knees.
     That’s when I saw them, all of them: reds, blues, yellows, and greens. They were inside classrooms, out in the woods. They were everywhere, getting ready.
     And now I was ready, too.
 
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13 comments:

  1. I have really enjoy all of your little excerpts that you've highlighted here Melanie. Great job with this challenge!

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  2. Wow, awesome finish. What is his power. Who are these people. Great job in the challenge.

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  3. What a great ending to this Challenge! I want to know more about this school though and what they do.

    Congratulations on making it to Z!!! :D

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  4. You bet I want to read it now!
    Congratulations on completing the Challenge.

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  5. Just bought my copy! And great entry to end the challenge with :D

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  6. Congratulations on reaching the AtoZ finishing line, Melanie!

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  7. Ooo! Ready for what? Congrats, Melanie on getting to z.

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  8. Hello, Melanie,
    I can't figure out why I'm just landing here.
    D'you have another blog that I've been visiting.
    I feel as if I'm in the twilight zone.
    Tweeted this.

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  9. Hi, Melanie,

    Thanks for all your visits to my blog. I've enjoyed the flash fiction. Congratulations on completing the Challenge!

    Mary Montague Sikes

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  10. Congratulations on finishing the challenge.

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  11. Fantastic send off for the challenge!!!!

    Congrats to the other winners....

    I am thrilled... Thank you so much Melanie!

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  12. Congratulations on crossing the finish line, Melanie!

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