A is for All-Star
The ball cracked against the bat as it made
contact. I love that sound; the sound of a sure homerun.
“Go, go, go,” my coach yells, like he didn’t
recognize the pitch, like he still expects me to do a mad dash to get as many
bases as I can.
I glance back at my team. They’re just as
clueless, and just as frenzied.
So I run.
My foot hits home just as the ball crashes
through my coach’s windshield.
Don't forget to sign up for the Rafflecopter running all through A to Z
Great start to the month! I always wondered what was up with Steven. I need to get on the rest of the books.
ReplyDeleteAwesome ending! I laughed out loud.
ReplyDeleteThe coach should know where not to park his car. LOL
ReplyDeleteLOL!! I love it.
ReplyDeleteYikes! Great start to the challenge.
ReplyDeleteHahaha...oh the coach had it coming :P
ReplyDeleteInteresting story :-) Check out some flash fiction at my AtoZ series too
ReplyDeleteGS at Moontime Tunes
Great way to approach the challenge... tie it in to one of your stories...
ReplyDeleteGreat beginning--I'm already hooked. See you tomorrow!
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
Linda
How fun! I look forward to reading for the next 25 days. :)
ReplyDeleteOoh, a collection of flash fiction sounds like a great way to do the challenge! Fun beginning, looking forward to more!
ReplyDeleteWhat a brief and funny piece for a cool concept! I should try flash fiction more. I tend to write the opposite so flash fiction is more of a challenge.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteI like your entry for A. I think we can all relate to that moment of excitement and then moment of dread. Thank you for stopping by my site as well.
ReplyDeleteOopsie, great ending! :)
ReplyDelete