Monday, April 21, 2014

R is for Reactions


 
For this year’s A to Z, I will be doing a collection of flash fiction featuring Steven, the MC from Blackbird, from right before he came to Newstead through his first year there.
 
R is for Reactions 

His eyes narrowed when he saw my face. “You’re tired,” he said, like that was my excuse.  
He got to his feet and I followed his lead.
Guess that’s all the intro I’ll be getting. I began to wonder if I would’ve gotten more if I reacted the way he wanted.
We left his office, then the office building in silence. No one was walking outside that time.

I am giving out review copies of Blackbird through Story Cartel, in exchange for Amazon Reviews (And blog reviews would be great, too) before it’s official release date on May 1st You can get your copy here  Also, Story Cartel is doing a big giveaway of its own this month, so signing up for a review of any book featured there puts your name in that pot. 

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10 comments:

  1. Another excellent snippet, Melanie. Then again, they're all great! Pretty much have a review for you ready to go--and it's a lovely one!!

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  2. I really want to know what's going to happen to him...

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  3. I can't decide from your snippets if the school is a good place or not?

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  4. There is such wonderful over/under tones of the sinister...

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  5. I am wondering what the heck is going on. Very good way to pull us in!

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  6. Keeping up with the intrigue and tension, Melanie... Well done!

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  7. I can't wait to find out what happens when he wakes up!

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  8. Oh, Steven. What have you gotten yourself into, indeed.

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  9. Interesting piece. I want to keep reading.

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  10. I'm loving these snippets, Melanie! Whets my appetite :)

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