tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post6556677774749600683..comments2024-02-24T00:47:46.862-08:00Comments on Melanie Schulz: A to Z: C is for CastawayAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11622191037152999869noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-53523085670335276742015-04-06T09:39:55.674-07:002015-04-06T09:39:55.674-07:00This has a profound feeling to it, loneliness.This has a profound feeling to it, loneliness.Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11026644605799767199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-30047174379980555442015-04-05T02:48:07.731-07:002015-04-05T02:48:07.731-07:00So simple, yet effective. You captured the feeling...So simple, yet effective. You captured the feelings perfectly. Laura Clipsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02748489198957473503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-9835509876455244332015-04-04T21:14:13.827-07:002015-04-04T21:14:13.827-07:00I really like this one!!! Well done Melanie! Elle ...I really like this one!!! Well done Melanie! <a href="http://erraticprojectjunkie.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Elle @ Erratic Project Junkie</a>ErraticEllehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08807468379577508119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-76855442314370034282015-04-04T02:35:51.524-07:002015-04-04T02:35:51.524-07:00I love the last line. Such a simple, yet profound ...I love the last line. Such a simple, yet profound statement. A really enjoyable story, thanks. :)Sara C. Sniderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16148040154590535970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-726035150859633602015-04-03T19:38:51.698-07:002015-04-03T19:38:51.698-07:00You have such a talent of taking just a few words ...You have such a talent of taking just a few words and weaving them into a gripping story--leaving readers wanting more. You, temptress, you!Susan Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09834094675218254410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-33750471715154144582015-04-03T16:31:52.735-07:002015-04-03T16:31:52.735-07:00Your flash fiction is one of the main reasons I...Your flash fiction is one of the main reasons I'm enjoying A-Z this year!!<br /><br />Random is an understatement... and how come there's silence.... Does Wilson show up? :)Mark Koopmanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03634424953074803816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-24738207017889857032015-04-03T16:06:35.833-07:002015-04-03T16:06:35.833-07:00If it's always darkest before the dawn, what h...If it's always darkest before the dawn, what happens after the Silence? I'm getting a *YIKES* feeling. And I love it! :O) Very engaging, Melanie! Shared to G+LuAnn @ BackPorchervationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01775630749079885915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-14659240418624725872015-04-03T15:04:49.542-07:002015-04-03T15:04:49.542-07:00Oh dear. I'm quite worried about him.Oh dear. I'm quite worried about him.Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-77293653265547998962015-04-03T13:37:09.770-07:002015-04-03T13:37:09.770-07:00Just found you today and I think I'm gonna hav...Just found you today and I think I'm gonna have to come back for some other letters, good story!Noah Dietzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00411255790161449971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-32771188305121929572015-04-03T11:06:06.487-07:002015-04-03T11:06:06.487-07:00Great flash. You give hope and then yank it away.
...Great flash. You give hope and then yank it away.<br /><br />~Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~<br />Member of C. Lee's Muffin Commando Squad<br /><a href="http://storydam.com/" rel="nofollow">Story Dam</a><br /><a href="http://www.patricialynne.com/blog.html" rel="nofollow">Patricia Lynne, Indie Author</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-27534751196836817352015-04-03T10:11:44.561-07:002015-04-03T10:11:44.561-07:00Perfect. After the first hectic making sure of sur...Perfect. After the first hectic making sure of survival, the loneliness settles in.Susan Gourley/Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02669793865290876168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-86433631894831788982015-04-03T10:09:57.409-07:002015-04-03T10:09:57.409-07:00Awesome job, Melanie. Such power in such a small a...Awesome job, Melanie. Such power in such a small amount of words!!!randi leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14207001299508931034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-16808439621570328042015-04-03T09:43:39.690-07:002015-04-03T09:43:39.690-07:00Oooh, I like this theme! The idea of being strande...Oooh, I like this theme! The idea of being stranded on an island sounds pretty good...until that very last line. *shudder*Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280329345834868273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-89371177533106185682015-04-03T08:47:10.133-07:002015-04-03T08:47:10.133-07:00Getting stuck on an island would freak me out. I&#...Getting stuck on an island would freak me out. I'd rather deal with zombies. :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-79440332888128977702015-04-03T08:33:37.348-07:002015-04-03T08:33:37.348-07:00I love the brevity of these statements. Just the w...I love the brevity of these statements. Just the way someone with few resources would handle their thoughts.J.L. Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05666634455836834179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-36870580849068978192015-04-03T08:20:27.918-07:002015-04-03T08:20:27.918-07:00Visiting from A/Z. I first thought "oh good, ...Visiting from A/Z. I first thought "oh good, fish to eat" until reading later that the fish had moved on. Hopefully still fruit there. nicely written!<br /><br />bettybettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06323135450742337670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-10038886826781103682015-04-03T07:52:43.863-07:002015-04-03T07:52:43.863-07:00And eerie place to be all by oneself...And eerie place to be all by oneself...Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-11584066287257409992015-04-03T06:28:33.643-07:002015-04-03T06:28:33.643-07:00That silence would drive me mad. That silence would drive me mad. Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-14368532248892357812015-04-03T06:23:14.818-07:002015-04-03T06:23:14.818-07:00This was like reading Chuck Noland's diary, if...This was like reading Chuck Noland's diary, if he ever wrote when marooned on that island! Good one :)<br />Hope you are having a great time reading, writing and networking with co-participants of the A to Z Challenge. Cheers :)<br /><a href="http://shilpaagarg.com/" rel="nofollow"> Co-Host AJ's wHooligan for the A to Z Challenge 2015</a>Shilpa Garghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11016927627801620377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-83522731792094479772015-04-03T06:20:34.162-07:002015-04-03T06:20:34.162-07:00From hope to despair, very powerful, well done!
So...From hope to despair, very powerful, well done!<br />Sophie<br /><a href="http://sophiesthoughtsandfunmbles.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">Sophie's Thoughts & Fumbles</a><br /><a href="http://fantasyboysxxx.blogspot.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">FB3X</a><br /><a href="http://www.wittegenpress.com/wp_main/blog" rel="nofollow">Wittegen Press</a>Sophie Duncanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768033409563305140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-9026589522649773222015-04-03T05:22:26.247-07:002015-04-03T05:22:26.247-07:00An excellent post and most interesting.
Yvonne .An excellent post and most interesting.<br /><br />Yvonne .nashvillecats2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02326956741209246895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-56020553047670388062015-04-03T04:58:13.356-07:002015-04-03T04:58:13.356-07:00Oooo. You can say so much in so few words. That la...Oooo. You can say so much in so few words. That last sentence has punch.Bish Denhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13359927719391990534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-1966004987176068962015-04-03T04:10:41.688-07:002015-04-03T04:10:41.688-07:00Okay, that was awesome! Excellent job!
Precious ...Okay, that was awesome! Excellent job!<br /><br /><a href="http://www.preciousmonsters.com" rel="nofollow">Precious Monsters</a>Jolie du Prehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01134800013010890881noreply@blogger.com