tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post4037644671394136129..comments2024-02-24T00:47:46.862-08:00Comments on Melanie Schulz: D is for DecievedAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11622191037152999869noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-33844790397333031052014-04-04T18:13:29.501-07:002014-04-04T18:13:29.501-07:00My heart jumped when the coach put his hand on his...My heart jumped when the coach put his hand on his shoulder. Whatever he's up to, it's not good.<br />Blessings,<br />LindaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-11128142995098830162014-04-04T15:01:50.228-07:002014-04-04T15:01:50.228-07:00This is great! I want to know more! You are defin...This is great! I want to know more! You are definitely a talented writer.L.G. Keltnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-80803303540133991752014-04-04T14:32:15.843-07:002014-04-04T14:32:15.843-07:00Found your blog in the A to Z Challenge. This is v...Found your blog in the A to Z Challenge. This is very interesting. I'm writing about spending much of my childhood with a family that just decided to keep me & here you are writing about anther ominous adult-helps-child scenario. Excellent build-up. I look forward to reading more.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09773449834173767180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-75065823006548537992014-04-04T12:53:59.593-07:002014-04-04T12:53:59.593-07:00Hmmm, just what is Coach up to?Hmmm, just what is Coach up to?Bish Denhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13359927719391990534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-74218269548491592282014-04-04T12:44:15.910-07:002014-04-04T12:44:15.910-07:00I like this Melanie. Pacey and fresh. Keep it goin...I like this Melanie. Pacey and fresh. Keep it going.Fran Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02058039806466929922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-1895175057898938902014-04-04T11:31:12.375-07:002014-04-04T11:31:12.375-07:00Nicely done! And thanks for stopping by my blog.Nicely done! And thanks for stopping by my blog.The Silver Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00730805376957629641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-8780818394821389222014-04-04T09:01:59.059-07:002014-04-04T09:01:59.059-07:00Wow, kind of creepy and ominous. Another great pie...Wow, kind of creepy and ominous. Another great piece.Susan Gourley/Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02669793865290876168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-28591759246739556962014-04-04T08:16:39.380-07:002014-04-04T08:16:39.380-07:00Nice segment. Wish it weren't dark though. Wel...Nice segment. Wish it weren't dark though. Well-written work!<br /><br /><a href="http://marymontaguesikes.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Mary Montague Sikes</a>Notes Along the Way with Mary Montague Sikeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17417679983279135001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-20199805872515242982014-04-04T07:41:27.414-07:002014-04-04T07:41:27.414-07:00Very intriguing... Love the build up....Very intriguing... Love the build up....Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-81858068340489131292014-04-04T07:24:37.779-07:002014-04-04T07:24:37.779-07:00This poor kid. It sucks to find out someone you tr...This poor kid. It sucks to find out someone you trusted doesn't have your best interest at heart!jaybirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10708353376256621965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-76319433172845953412014-04-04T06:03:04.266-07:002014-04-04T06:03:04.266-07:00The plot thickens! Can't wait to read tomorrow...The plot thickens! Can't wait to read tomorrow's piece.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com