tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post3617449900092657136..comments2024-02-24T00:47:46.862-08:00Comments on Melanie Schulz: Riders on the Storm, part 2Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11622191037152999869noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1208849527292516590.post-47615648752261467442011-01-12T15:10:16.205-08:002011-01-12T15:10:16.205-08:00Wow, scary and tense. The main character's lif...Wow, scary and tense. The main character's life is in her father's hands. The whistling adds a very creepy and effective touch. Good job! (As a note, the past tense of sneak is sneaked; most people don't know that. Snuck is commonly used, but it's not "right" grammarwise. You could get away with it during a line of dialogue, however.)Carol Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092209912983783974noreply@blogger.com